21st century speech on terrorism
terrorism is in my opinion pointless no one has the right to take another persons life for any reason especially against unarmed men,women and children there are cults such as IS that don’t abide by these laws.In my opinion it is a dangerous threat due to the fact ordinary people have succumbed to their rule and wish to aid them in there efforts however this is their choice but we have not tried to stop this there are several ways this menace can be ended one of which is all out war for which I believe should be the first action. They show no mercy.the other problem is racism on the Muslim religion due to to speculation that all terrorists are Muslims and are from the middle east.
One of the main issues is the fact they execute other people for what believe and thinking that there religion is right and superior even thought there actually is no higher calling and especially since it turns out most victims of terrorism turn out to be Muslims and followers of the same religion are attacked this is actually true to me this makes no sense Muslims migrating from places like Iraq and Syria if they can are asylum seekers looking for a normal life countries like the UK and America we should try to make it safe for them to return home and help them have a normal life.
To be perfectly honest I don’t see how we can prevent terrorism in the UK since there is no way of knowing who is a terrorist now we have racial groups such as British first attacking Muslims and any other racial groups since 9/11 we have been victim to several terrorist attacks on public transport there have been debates about attacking Syria and other terrorist cells throughout the western world personally i think we don’t have a choice since they wont stop attacking till their way of life is accepted. We can retaliate and fight back to show we are capable and not going to back down to them.
If terrorism isn’t stopped now it will grow and eventually take over its just like a cancer if we stop it early we can end it but if it spreads it can devastate the worlds future as a whole and what future generations will face so we must try to stop it before long otherwise it will become more powerful we should help the western world become a functional and peaceful nation and allow our nation to be protected in the process.
April 30, 2015 at 11:44 am
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